Did you mean what you said before? About the dead hanging around? You really believe it?
Second VerseShe asked where he lived. Second to the right,' said Peter, 'and then straight on till morning.
Peter PanCervantes' text and Menard's are verbally identical; but the second is almost infinitely richer.
Pierre Menard, Author of the QuixoteManaging games comes second. Managing people comes first.
Where Nobody Knows Your Name: Life In the Minor Leagues of BaseballThe reader is someone with an attention span of about 30 seconds.
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